Wednesday, April 20, 2011

Revised Proposal and Preliminary Thesis

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Hx03bNWZZXqE-_OLNq1fBZ8mVp8w_ibTF0G5qOn29HU/edit?hl=en&authkey=CNPSoJcO

3 comments:

  1. Thank you for clarifying and focusing your proposal by revising it. But as you received the maximum amount of points, 10/10 for the original proposal, there is not change in the points awarded for this portion of the project. But where is your Annotated Bibliography? It was due on April 20? Please contact your research adviser from LRC103 Ning- Hok-Lung Ko

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  2. Hi, my name is Hok-Lung, and I'm glad to be your research advisor. So far you did a good job on your Revised Proposal and Preliminary Thesis about the Asian Masculinity. I like it especially you have provided information about the South Asian male's background such as their culture and families. For your works in the future, please indicate more details to support your ideas and knowledge.
    I have found two online books for you shown below,

    http://books.google.com/books?id=y53COylUxsgC&pg=PA4&dq=South+Asian+male+masculinity&hl=en&ei=rh24TejbHIvegQeg9a3RDA&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=3&ved=0CDIQ6AEwAg#v=onepage&q=South%20Asian%20male%20masculinity&f=false

    http://books.google.com/books?id=jWj5OBvTh1IC&pg=PA522&dq=South+Asian+male+masculinity&hl=en&ei=rh24TejbHIvegQeg9a3RDA&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=4&ved=0CDgQ6AEwAw#v=onepage&q=South%20Asian%20male%20masculinity&f=false

    I hope you will find these useful. On your assignment Annotated Bibliography, please make sure you write three short paragraphs ‘summary, assessment and reflection’ for each source, and you will have to do three resources. Also, please be carefully on the format of the Annotated Bibliography:)

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  3. And, be free to ask me question via my email!
    hoklung.ko@live.lagcc.cuny.edu

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